MOONSHARD//SHADOWCLAN!!//FINISHED!

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MOONSHARD

Name;

Moonkit, Moonpaw, Moonshard

Gender;

Tom

Current Age;

20 Moons

Personality;

Moonshard is a goofy and talkative tom. He hates being picked on, and will usually snap at those who do. He isn't very bossy, and is possessive when he has things that are his. He has a very good temper, and can wait a while if he needs to. Patience was never that hard for him to achieve.

Clan;

Shadowclan

Rank:

Deputy

Eyes:

Blue

Pelt:

Gray with black stripes

Clan Page Description;

Moonshard; gray tom with blue eyes and black stripes

Scars:

Has one scar going down his right hind leg

|| History ||

Kit;

Moonshard was born in ShadowClan. He was adventurous and annoyed a lot of the older cats. He loved to hear the elders tell the stories of the long ago battles the Clan has had, and he always wanted to be a good warrior when he grew up.

Apprentice;

Moonshard was still a little goofy, but he knew when to be serious. He didn't like being picked on, and usually ignored the cats that did. He was never one to volunteer for helping the elders, but somehow it felt as if he was picked a lot. Then again, there weren't that many apprentices.

Warrior;

Moonshard became a warrior at fifteen moons after he helped fight in a border skirmish. His leader decided he was experienced enough and he became known as Moonshard from there on out. He was still playful, but more serious than he use to be. He never really criticized any cat, and never really got into fights with his other Clanmates. His one apprentice, Snowpaw, became a warrior, but died soon after when she was hit by a monster.

Deputy;

He became a deputy at nineteen moons when his leader died and the deputy took his place. The old deputy thought he was a pretty good warrior and let him become the next deputy.

(Some of this was really boring, wasn't it? Don't worry, I don't care if you say yes, cause I would have to agree.=P)

[flamewhisper]

ok, everything looks good except 2 things. 1: Black with grey stripes doesn't seem normal. You would have to buy that color. Grey with Black would work if the cat looked like this:


and 2: To be a deputy your cat needs to have had at least 1 apprentice as a warrior. (PS: Did you ask Leah about this first? Cause Leaders and Dep's need to be asked for first)

So quickly fix those two things (and tell me if you asked leah) and I'll accept him.

Flame

[Cross]

Sorry 'bout that. Yeah, I'll go ahead and put gray with black stripes, and I did ask Leah if I could make a high rank.

[flamewhisper]

Alright, just wanted to make sure.
AAAAAnyway....


ACCEPTED!